Tuesday 10 January 2017

It's a Snowy day out there. Please stay safe.

HI everyone.  
It certainly feels like winter out there today.
Your job today it to pick a picture that is about snow.
Your job is to write a story in 3-4 paragraphs that relate to your picture.

Possible Ideas
animals in the snow
snow sports
snow clothing
snow
snowflake
things I do in the snow
hating the snow
nature places in the snow


My example (from Mrs. Knibbe)

    I love the snow.  When it snows, I have the best day ever. Rolling and playing in  the snow makes me so happy.  I love the feeling of the crunchy snow against my nose when I dig my face into the snow.  Summer just isn't as much fun.

     The one problem with the winter, is that there is less food available. So during the winter, we polar bears, have to hunt more. This means that we have to travel more distance than in the summer when looking for food.  We travel as we hunt for seals and Walrus. This guy won't be so happy when I catch up with him for a winter snack.




Success Criteria

So you have to include...
1. a picture
2. 3-4 paragrapsh
3. edit and revise your work
4. colour code your topic sentences, your detail sentences and your concluding sentence (each a different colour